This quietly told story is one of my absolute favorites here on fictionpress, mainly because of the enviroment and as I said, the calm, quiet wording.

Both Julian and Isaiah are believeable characters and it's really good that Matt has such a big role as he has, so that Julian and Isaiah become "isolated" from the group than necessary. Even though I love their heart-to-heart's with all of mine~ You're very good at portraiting Isaiah's struggle to find who he is, without "telling" te reader what's going on. Kudos to you for that, that you're making the conversation between especially Matt and Julian so realistic. Even the conversation Isaiah had with John and Hamilton in the bathroom didn't feel orced at all. That's really good.

What makes me a little sad, is just that fact that you haven't updated in a while... I really hope that you haven't given up on this one, 'cause I'm still eagerly awaitng the next chapter(s)!

God damn it. I ran out of story. D:

I like this. It should definitely have more reviews. Kudos to you.

I absolutely love it! It's very cute and endearing, and has a lot of potential. Please write the next chapter quickly! Haha :3

I really love the relationship between Isaiah and Julian! they are so cute together! i can't wait to read more! keep it up! D

I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story. It's well written and I haven't noticed any annoying typos which is always a plus.

Julian is very believable as a character. I know guys who are just as random and unrestrained as him, so no issue with his free spiritedness.

I'm uncertain what to make of Isaiah yet. Although his virginal ways and social ignorance makes him heart-warming as a character, I'm not sure if his ignorance about all things sexual and social will wear a bit thin. Perhaps balance out the areas where he lacks knowledge by demonstrating areas where he is very knowledgeable. Or possibly just making him a sexual freak. ;)

great work and keep the writing up.

Very well written. The tone is quite sophisticated. I'm curious to see where this is going. :)

Its a great story! Keep it up!

this seems pretty intresting, Isaiah is a very 3d character I would love to find out more about his backround especially his mom who seems a little strange to me

i see that u have shorten the chapters...loving it

Isaiah is so cute!

I adore this story:) don't rush into things though, take the time to build up the characters!

please continue.

u shuld continue this