|Reviews for Summer Haze|
| Cynthia Brent chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Great story! I really liked the poetic way you described the hills, the landscape, even the blood and the bullets whizzing by. You can always "hold" a story for a day or two to proofread, though. Sometimes you find the same adjective or phrase repeated two or three times!
| fueille chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I love how you wrote this. Great job. :)