Reviews for Twirled like petals
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Ordinary nobody.. nice! D... i love the way to compared him to a petal and i spotted some personification... D
YoursInDemigodishness chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Very beautiful, truly. You did a wonderful job with this poem. I feel really bad for him, too. Good job in provoking feelings in the reader. ;)