|Reviews for trainwreck|
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
| Homura Kitsune chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
There are a few grammar mistakes, like "...this wouldn't of worked out" should be "...this wouldn't have worked out". I think this deserves another proofread.
Otherwise, I really like it. The stylization you choose I think was a good choice. You placed the underlines and bold lettering really well so that it isn't so much as to lose its effect but still enough to make a point.