Aww it was pretty a paragraph of one that says I love you long before I one kill me so its waist not waste.:D

Loved the ending. I loved all the cute little anecdotes that built up their relationship too.

O.O
This is so... just... WOW!
I sooo LOVE it! Just everything... WOW :D

Okay that story was like the most fabulous thing ever! :) you go! Xx

This wasn't bad. I must say, I absolutely love Sam's reaction XD He goes on a complete tirade about how Jake's an idiot and how much he loves him at the same time. It was funny and cute.

One of the most heart racing confessions I ever read. Definitely, one of my favourites (: i loved it

Aww it was a really cute story ) !

Nice work !

Rose.

I liked this alot, wished it was longer but it made sense, i loved that line about the truth of their relationship when they first met, it was obvious it was sam the whole time who was in love but waited until jake confessed first.

I adore Sam's co-dependancy! He's cute deep down, and despite his homophobia, loves Jake. I know the next chapter's going to be really angsty but so far this one's fluffy and makes me smile. :D

Where'd you come up with these ideas? I want to know so I can rob that bank, too!

I like how the title really relates to Jake's frame of mind, and how you chose to write it from Jake's view despite the fact he's "top" (I've been told it's called).

Poor Jake... really easy to relate to his anxiety. Sam's funny, though, even if he is a bit of a jerk.

Adorable Chapter Two! Really like Jake's sweetness to contrast with Sam's bitterness, and Sam's hidden affection for Jake.

Good, really, really good. The switching perspectives is effective and the plot has a good dabble of humor mixing in with it's angst.

huhu, interesting !