Reviews for love
Undertakers Child chapter 1 . 7/13/2001
I like this poem, short yet to the point. I hope to see more like this from you soon, and thank you so much for reviewing my story
PanChan chapter 1 . 6/1/2001
You seem wise upon your years young one. I hope you continue writing peotry, I'm looking foward to seeing some of your future work! _ Keep up the good work.
Rosekeet chapter 1 . 5/26/2001
That was good but its not a hiaku...
Tank Girl1 chapter 1 . 5/25/2001
Ginny Malfoy chapter 1 . 5/24/2001
er...that's not much of a haiku
Lamont1 chapter 1 . 5/24/2001
Your poem is great.

It is not a haiku though.

Still it’s very nice.

Haikus are simple.

It’s all about syllables.

Here is the format.

The first line has five.

The second line has seven.

The third line has five.

And check your spelling.

“Darkest” and “there” are misspelled.

Into is one word.

And “poem” is wrong.

I really enjoyed it though.

Hope you keep writing
lover chapter 1 . 5/24/2001
to short but ok