Reviews for Mer
lamourlibre chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Very nice short!

I feel that this could easily prelude one of my own poems called "Unfulfilled (A Beautiful Destiny)", a poem about a mermaid who feels like she doesn't belong in the ocean! (actually, that's not what it's about at all! ... that's just the surface of the entire thing).

Great job. :)
LunaRS chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
this is pretty interesting. my only complaint is to make things longer. can't wait to see what you do next!