Reviews for Unexpected Situation
bribri chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
this is really great. Hope you continue it
SNAPE4 chapter 3 . 10/24/2011
oolalala:)

i like it. update soon
upsatey chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
love this story! update ASAP
Damanai chapter 3 . 10/3/2011
I really like where the story is going.

But there are a few things I'd like to say. Like i said i like where you are heading with the story, but i noticed there are a few shaky areas with the story. I like the plot of the story just fine but while i was reading i failed to see and real transition between topics, time, or conversation. The dialogue of the story can get a little confusing, i would suggest maybe separating the dialogue that each different person say to avoid confusion as to who says what.

Another thing i noticed was the sentence structure, now i am now English wiz but the way in which you explain or present the thoughts of Leyla seems rather forced. so maybe like i mentioned before it has to do with the transition.

I don't mean this review to be in anyway mean, hurtful or a flame; it is simply my opinion.

That aside I really can't wait to see what your story brings to the table. I have to say that i am always a sucker for the arrogant male character in any story, can't wait to see how Mr. Sexy FBI Agent develops. Good luck! )
Dani Blade chapter 3 . 10/3/2011
this is awesome! i love it! i cant wait for more! D
JEM611 chapter 3 . 10/3/2011
I am in love with this story already! I'm so happy you updated and I can't wait for another chapter )
Hannah chapter 3 . 10/3/2011
Amazing story i seriously love it. I hope you post soon your next chapter. It's an original idea and i love it. 3

lol but the agent is kind of a bastard. Lol :)
Maria6 chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
I hope you update this soon I love it already )
DevourtheStars chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
Good storyline. Haven't heard of of this yet, so I guess it's original.

Could use more punctuation and spelling checks, line spacings between dialogue and such though. And more plotting, sort of rushing all the main points too fast.

Overally a really good story! I will definitely be reading this story! Keep the good work up though, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
xbabex chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
this seems like its gonna be an awesome couple XD
Celesteee chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
woah! Faux Marriage? Update soon!
celesteeee chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I'm so interested in this story! Can't wait for more
JEM611 chapter 2 . 7/4/2011
Love stories like this! Update soon
JEM611 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
sounds good so far )
AngelLunatic chapter 2 . 7/4/2011
Please, upload more chapters! This story is getting really interesting! _

I really like the style in which you write so please update soon! o
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