Reviews for Unexpected Situation |
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![]() ![]() this is really great. Hope you continue it |
![]() ![]() ![]() oolalala:) i like it. update soon |
![]() ![]() love this story! update ASAP |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like where the story is going. But there are a few things I'd like to say. Like i said i like where you are heading with the story, but i noticed there are a few shaky areas with the story. I like the plot of the story just fine but while i was reading i failed to see and real transition between topics, time, or conversation. The dialogue of the story can get a little confusing, i would suggest maybe separating the dialogue that each different person say to avoid confusion as to who says what. Another thing i noticed was the sentence structure, now i am now English wiz but the way in which you explain or present the thoughts of Leyla seems rather forced. so maybe like i mentioned before it has to do with the transition. I don't mean this review to be in anyway mean, hurtful or a flame; it is simply my opinion. That aside I really can't wait to see what your story brings to the table. I have to say that i am always a sucker for the arrogant male character in any story, can't wait to see how Mr. Sexy FBI Agent develops. Good luck! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is awesome! i love it! i cant wait for more! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in love with this story already! I'm so happy you updated and I can't wait for another chapter ) |
![]() ![]() Amazing story i seriously love it. I hope you post soon your next chapter. It's an original idea and i love it. 3 lol but the agent is kind of a bastard. Lol :) |
![]() ![]() I hope you update this soon I love it already ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good storyline. Haven't heard of of this yet, so I guess it's original. Could use more punctuation and spelling checks, line spacings between dialogue and such though. And more plotting, sort of rushing all the main points too fast. Overally a really good story! I will definitely be reading this story! Keep the good work up though, I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() this seems like its gonna be an awesome couple XD |
![]() ![]() woah! Faux Marriage? Update soon! |
![]() ![]() I'm so interested in this story! Can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love stories like this! Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds good so far ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, upload more chapters! This story is getting really interesting! _ I really like the style in which you write so please update soon! o |