Reviews for The Bullied
Joyce.RE chapter 13 . 3/4/2023
Wow! I was so surprised to see an update! I really hope you finish, I want to see where they end up at the 12 year mark. I can totally see a dark BDSM M/s situation where she never really consented but also never really fought it. I can see Dom tendencies in him and hope he grows into that and eventually does some aftercare. Looking forward to the next update.
Guest chapter 13 . 2/17/2023
maylavender chapter 12 . 7/17/2021
I’ve fallen in love with this story. I love Roman and Emmelines extended interactions together. As terrible as it is I’ve fallen for this relationship. I’m not sure why but I thought Jace was going to be Roman’s rival in regards to Emmeline, oh well I still love it.
Congratulations on finishing your masters! I know with getting a PhD it’ll take a little longer for you to upload chapters here but just know you have fans that love your work and support you!
Yu chapter 12 . 12/14/2020
Nice but when are more coming
Guest chapter 12 . 4/23/2020
Please finish it. I love it. Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
Love this story. I still check back every now to see if there is a new chapter up. Hope you update soon! :)
herondalechick123 chapter 12 . 2/25/2019
Congratulations on getting your Master's! Also thank you for blessing us with a new chapter update. I'm so relieved that this story will be continued :)
Acie chapter 12 . 2/10/2019
You're back! Hallelujah
waiting4today chapter 12 . 2/7/2019
What a pleasant surprise to see a notification in my email inbox that you've updated this story! I was honestly resigned to the fact that this was going to be one of my unfinished favorites, so I feel like I've gotten a treat after reading this latest chapter today.

I still read this story from time to time on my FP app, even after all this time.

Here's my review:

There was already a foreboding about this dark room incident in the earlier chapters, and to read it threshed out in this chapter gives another facet to Roman and Emmeline's relationship. He's not just intimidating or coercing her, he has total physical and psychological domination over her. To an extent, we can see how he revels in this power and control. He is becoming increasingly menacing, yet he is still quite immature in the way he threatens and pushes Emmeline to do what he wants. No doubt about it, he's still a boy, albeit a corrupted one.

Little by little we see glimpses of how his mind works, but one of the things that has me hooked on this story is his motivation for preying on Emmeline. How did he become that way? Just what is it that makes him so obsessed with her, and yet he still wants to project the image of being a cool, popular kid?

Roman may be young and attractive, but what he's doing is fundamentally wrong and no matter how you look at it, it will never be right. Even in real life, things aren't always black and white and Emmeline's conflict between her emotions and her attraction to him make a fine study of the impact such an experience leaves on the victim, and the readers hope that it is not only Emmeline who is changed by this experience, but also the bully/abuser.
perfect.fluke chapter 6 . 2/7/2019
I apologize for probably filling up your inbox with my random short comments. but it's really good and I want your review count to go up. so sorry XD
perfect.fluke chapter 5 . 2/7/2019
and as I finished this chapter I realised I have actually read your fic on ff and left a review hahah
perfect.fluke chapter 4 . 2/7/2019
Eyyy another dramione shipper in the wild!
perfect.fluke chapter 12 . 2/6/2019
eyyy! I'm gonna have to reread everything now cause the latest chapter is so interesting and I forgot about this story. This has given me inspiration to continue writing the fanfic i've been crawling through haha
Thanks for the update! Hope all is well! Keep up your studies!
Marjulie chapter 12 . 2/4/2019
The more I know of Roman, the less I understand. How is that even possible? The word sociopath comes into my mind.

For Emmeline's sake, I don't know if she'll win the war the end, but I sincerely hope she'll at least win one battle against Roman
IceCapped chapter 12 . 2/4/2019
Not gonna lie, I almost forgot about this story. So I had to read through it again. And yes, it's really interesting. Welcome back!
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