Reviews for The Reeling
Rito Lacota chapter 2 . 11/17/2020
I got a bit confused at first on what was happening and who died at first, right until I continued re-reading it which it than made sense. My favourite part in this chapter was this:
"Fact: this was my third attempt."
"Another Fact: This was also my third failure."
This was really funny to read! XD
Rito Lacota chapter 1 . 11/17/2020
This is hilarious! I love all the jokes in this! Especially the parts about neverland and peter pan and shoes! I'm laughing so hard right now that I had to sit here correcting my grammar before posting this review. The punctuation is really good already which only draws my interest in even more. Along with the storyline is already: romantic, funny, deep, soothing, and interesting. Mainly the details! This chapter was so descriptive I just loved every bit of it. Time honestly went fast when reading this chapter. Can't wait to read chapter two!
Vallucast chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
Okay, I must admit that I kinda liked this story up to the point till I read the part that sounds like 'what kind of gay nime is that? Even Mohammed is better'.
I don't even know how to convey how dissapointed and angry it feels. For you to disregard that name that badly. I don't know whether you're atheis or not but please change the name otherwise I'll take other step.
Good day.
Stephanie chapter 10 . 12/2/2011
Wow, I was surprised that Alex opened Bia mind to Jacob. I'm relieved. Also scared about Emily 's reaction to seeing her brother for the firstime in 13y.
Stephanie chapter 9 . 12/2/2011
Alex is holding his emotions back from Jacob by not allowing himself to feel anything for Jacob while they have sex. This isn't good.
Stephanie chapter 8 . 12/2/2011
You did an excellent job on their first sex scene. It was very hot and erotic.
Stephanie chapter 7 . 12/2/2011
Oh shit! Jacob froze up right when they were going to finally do it. I can understand since Damien used to rape him and that is all he knew before.
Stephanie chapter 6 . 12/2/2011
Whoa, Alex turned Tina! She's quite the character. I loved how Alex called Jacob "little one." So sweet.
Stephanie chapter 5 . 12/2/2011
Alex is just so sweet to poor flustered Jacob. I like how Alex hasn't put the moves on Jacob but allowed him to come to him first.
Stephanie chapter 4 . 12/2/2011
12 years of behaviors due to abuse would be very difficult to change. Glad to see that Alex. Is patient and Jacob is making progress.
stephanie chapter 3 . 12/2/2011
Love Damien's pad. Poor Jacob still doesn't trust him but I don't blame him.
stephanie chapter 2 . 12/2/2011
Whoa, Alex. Is an empath...meaning he can read minds? Cool.
stephanie chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
I really like the start of this story. Jacob is rescued from his abusive maker, Damien. Alex seems too good to be true.
thecrivens chapter 22 . 7/26/2011
hi! I read this story in adultfanfiction and I love it. Too bad I can't write any review since I'm not a member. This story really broke my heart. I thought there would be a happy ending when Alex saved Jacob, I didn't see Damian second coming to the story. really, there should be a way to get rid of him so Alex and Jacob can be together again. But I kinda like Mo. So, maybe you'll create a menage-a-trois between Alex-Jacob-Mo? I'll be looking forward to seeing what you'll do to Alex, Jacob, and Mo next :D
lost in pale blue chapter 22 . 7/25/2011
Poor Jacob, not being able to trust Alex as long as Damian's personality is still there :( And poor Alex, not being able to control it even with how old he is.

I really hope they can be together again. I look forward to the sequel.
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