Reviews for Empty
Guest1221 chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
You liar! This ain'ta no first draft! And it's amazing!
InkedGirl chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Holy cow that was amazing! Such a creative and beautiful story. It reminds me of a classic fairy-tale. Loved it!
fay208 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
omg... its too deep. how could they survived without emotions. well written shot, I say. good job :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
this is a really good story! i wishmore people did heartfelt meaningful work like this. i really like this and it speaks to me about how people act in the world around us. really good for a first draft and i really want to read more of your stuff. Keep it up! :P x
Lillian chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
This story left me breathless. It was absolutely stunning.
Snaps4You chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. There are no other words to describe this story. The depth of the story, the feeling behind it even though they had no emotions, and the haunting tone of it all made the story simply stunning. Thank you for creating such a brilliant, insightful masterpiece for us all to read, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
RiddlesAreMystery chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I think that this is a very deep story! Very cute as well! Very meaningful and sends a message that everyone can love and feel! **