|Reviews for Words A Day 2011: The Wasting July|
| skersey chapter 17 . 7/19/2011
It's not that this sucks! (have some more confidence) I don't know the time of day you upload your work, but maybe after you initially write something, you could muddle it over throughout the day, and then post in the evening or at night.
For this poem, I would suggest that perhaps you could describe the girl more, and use slightly more flowery language because this is very prose-y. Just maybe be more descriptive in your language :)
| Very nice chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Although I don't usually care for poetry, I love your writing style! Keep up the good work!
| Thoth Tarot chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
i like the sentiment and the humour