|Reviews for Heart and Soul|
| Eden Ellegory chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
Okay so far i like the basis and plot of the story, but you give TOO MUCH DETAIL.
I understand eyes lips and other important, distinctive features. The thing that throws me off is the shape of the face. (Is there such thing as a diamond shaped face?)
U should add features such as those in other areas.
aside from that the storyline is great!
| thepointlessfoghorn321 chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
just as faboulous as your other chapters have been! D keep up the good work.
| thepointlessfoghorn321 chapter 3 . 7/7/2011
Oh my gosh Eric is like that adorible little brother everyone wants because he is just so sweet! Your chapter is so well detailed. Good job, keep up the good work.
| Enderqueen Shado chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Please continue! I wonder what this will include...
| thepointlessfoghorn321 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I like this lay out for a story, it has real potential, it is just too short. Pudding is amazing by the way ) please write some more of this.