Reviews for The Fight For Acceptance
Luna Chase chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
I have longed for so long

For your acceptance

Although I do not know why.

You walked the halls

Armed with your serrated words

That you spoke with the sharpest,

Most efficient tongue of anyone

That has ever tried to cut me down.

Your words struck me in the chest

And I could not breathe.

Why would you want to hurt me so deeply?

Was it my clothes?

Did I talk too much?

Have too much money?

Was I too confident?

Did I stand out too easily?

Or is it because you

Just wanted to tear me down?

Just because you knew that you could?

I still haven't figured it out.

It's funny how all these years can pass.

Time can dull some of the pain

And in time the memory fades,

But every time I see you I remember.


You are the only man

That I've ever wanted to slap.

You were supposed to be my friend,

Instead you chose to leave me to bleed out.

Scraped me off of your Converses like bubble gum

Left in the street to mold.

Why would you be so cold?

You didn't comfort me when I cried.

You rejected me like last year's music.

I wasn't "cool" enough to hang with you

And your beautiful flawless crowd.

Instead you shivered

Whenever I walked down the hall,

Kicked me when I was already down,

Tried to turn my friend against me.

You liked to think that you knew who I was inside.

But why don't you come into the light?

Show me that there's good in everyone.

Let go of your stupid pride and say sorry.

You never really knew me.

You had a choice so why would you

Do that to me?

I trusted you.

You have no idea how

Deeply that you hurt me,

And I'm not going to tell you.

Instead I'll take the high road.

I'll admit that flicking you off

And telling you to go to Hell,

Didn't fully heal the hurt inside.

Oh it felt good at the time sure,

But it didn't give me the closure

That I was hoping for.

Only forgiveness will do that.

So if you want it it's here for you.

If not then I sincerely wish you the best.

-Luna Chase :)
L.A. Fleener chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
“Here's to the crazy ones. The misfits. The rebels. The troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes. The ones who see things differently. They're not fond of rules. And they have no respect for the status quo. You can quote them, disagree with them, glorify or vilify them. About the only thing you can't do is ignore them. Because they change things. They push the human race forward. And while some may see them as the crazy ones, we see genius. Because the people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world, are the ones who do.”
Cutos chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Okay so my topic is Racism. Im Asian and I hate it how everyone's all like 'oh youre good at math' and all that shit because of my skin color and how i look. dont give in to sterotypes, half of them arent true.

Love what ur doin with this, way to girl chickie!
Lunarlover chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Hello River darling :)

I know that we said that we wouldn't review each other because of how silly it is, but I want to tell you how awesome your poem is:)It speaks the truth about being different in a way that's simple, and yet it still hits home. I haven't thought of any stories to add yet, but the poem is awesome, and I want you to know that I love you girl. :)

Much love,

Lunarlover :)

(One half of Eve's Apples);)
XXXAdeleXXX chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Hi i'm Syx Adele(Pronounced Six),

I get teased about my name,but i have a different matter in hand too discuss.I am hetrosexual myself however i have nothing against those who are not.I believe diversity is beautiful and discrimination is the creater of uglyness.

I and many of my friends place ourselves on a slightly different spectrum,We are Goths and Emos and that is who we is stereotypes that surround us are so damaging! We do not follow stereo types or listen to such is our choice of music, clothes or even way of excpect us to be so emo friends are teased daily and regularly on the subject of self harm!And myself on satanism and is not right to say that if we describe ourselves with certain words we should be discriminated against!We are the same people inside. We scream for acceptence. Everyone on this planet is human...That is a huge thing to have in commom,we should accept that and STOP DESCRIMINATION! We are who we are...

Derek chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Dont laugh at me because

im different

don't laugh at me because

im alone

dont laugh at me because

your higher

on the pedastal.

don't laugh at me

i beg of you

please dont laugh.

-I dont really write well but u all kno what i mean so.
Dorkalots chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I'm crying

as they pull my hair.

I'm bleeding

as they dig their nails

into my skin

carving the word Different

sneering like its an eternal sin.

I try to rise

to stand against them

but my legs wobble

under all the prejudice

and i find myself becoming silent

numb with acceptance

that there will never be any acceptance

left for me.

~Post it, Idc.
Elliade chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Okay so ya'll crazy and AWESOME for creating this. IM not that good wit words so I'll just throw out a topic and watch it blossom. ABORTION. Holy fudge I said it. Yep, what do ya'll think about those who get abortions. In todays world ppl consider those that do as being DIFFERENT soooo yeah. Eat it up. Review with answers!
TearingThroughThem chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Thanks for allowing anonymous review, I doubt i'd have the courage to do this on my real account. I haven't really admitted this to anyone yet but I think Ima lesbian. I love looking at girls, the essence of them, but ima so scared that I'll be bullied for it. What should I do?
Blog About It chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Heyey, Rach/Riv! Anyhow, good idea btw, my topic is on the supposed "supernaturals/psychics" A lot of people doubt their existence but if someone walked up to us with legitiment proof would we be able to accept it? Just something I've been thinking about. What if humans aren't the Big Honcho as we believe, ya know.
HonkyTonkDonkyDonk chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
First of all I lurve this idea, nj! My topic is Special Needs. I absolutely HATE when people use the word retarded. My little brother has Autism and when we're just walking down the street people point and laugh and it makes me so angry. And the worst part is that he doesn't even realize their making fun of him, he's alway in his own little world. I love him alot and I just wish some people would grow up. Like you said, River, being Different is beautiful and we are all one people.
MarsPlanetIsDead chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Thanks for this. I'm, personally, a homosexual and I have no problems with straight people. It makes me angry that people think that just because we are Different that we should be treated like pariahs, like seriously. It's not like i ever infringe on your koolaid so why should you splash hateraid at us?
Karon chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Im completely thrilled that you are doing this, I dont really have a story but nonetheless keep it up XD