Reviews for Despair
China.Roses.Break chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I really enjoyed it! It was wonderfully angsty and insightful, and I love the way you played with words. My favorite part was 'I went away, a way, my way - not yours. I sold my soul to the cold - I was comfortably dumb and numb.' It would've been great if it were longer, but it's still amazing.
unwilling outcast chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Loved the start of it the words are very relatable and real, they hold a lot of emotion that comes alive as you read it. I did think the end was a little rushed compared to the start but that is just me nit picking, overall i enjoyed it a lot. Keep writing.