|Reviews for stranger|
| the way you look at me chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I love this. Excellent word choice, the second stanza plus the last, one line ending is great.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
The sense of longing is so palpable in this piece.
Love your pen name by the way
| arrhythmias chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
oh, i love this one. it's sweet, and the happiness is refreshing. it's been a while since i've read legitimately /happy/ poetry, you know? :)
| Dr. Sweet chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Reminds me of my own thoughts about a close friend, i like it