Reviews for Cat And Mouse
non.graceful chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
It's kind of one of those 'pick on somebody your own size' type of poems... Well at least to me...

I think you should work on your poetic techniques and check out some poets (not Shakespear- anything but him) and analyze their writing to give you dome ideas for your work...

Try some assonance or metaphors and similies into your work- it'll not only sophisticate your poems but emit feeling from them...

Oh yeah! I saw this in the 'just in' category a while ago and didn't want to read it because the sumarry was a bit bland... Maybe you should change it? I also came across it again as I received an email from you and thought that your work needed the attention and advice...

Be glad that I did not scold you like the person I reviewed s moment ago... :)

Overal great job!
xMissNalax chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I love it :3