Reviews for Gavin: Pick and Choose: May 2028
SecretAgent99 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Hi, I got your review request. :) I thought this was a really good story that was well-written. I liked that Gavin made Ethan a deal that would depend on how well he did his chores and other stuff. It seems like it would be a good learning experience. There was only one typo I saw, and it was in "And should any of this not be accomplished, you may not become part of a time. Should you become part of a team and then start to lose sight of your responsibilities, it will be on you to get back on them. You will be committed to that team, but your home and family come first." It should say team, not time. :)