Reviews for Compensation of Spotlight
dru83 chapter 121 . 10/21/2015
Hey, it's great to see another chapter! There's a few spots in this one where it looks like your sentences got jumbled up. A sentence will suddenly change direction mid-way, and then I'll find something that looks like it was supposed be part of that sentence somewhere else. Anyway, it's good to see another chapter, so keep them coming!
katmama chapter 120 . 2/17/2015
This is such an unusual story.
dru83 chapter 118 . 1/15/2015
Hey, it's so good to see another chapter from you after such a long time. This one seems very well done. There's not many spelling/grammar issues.

The one punctuation issue I found is there are a couple spots in your dialogs where you have a period instead of a comma, thus creating sentence fragments. For example, instead of saying:

"This weekend." Luck answered.

You should say "This weekend," Luck answered.

I like how you've brought up the possibility of Spot being a protector. It's nice when you surprise the reader, although, it has been so long since I've read this that it took a second to remember what a protector was.
KoriLee123 chapter 117 . 6/6/2014
It's been forever since I've been on FP.
ANYWAY, this story has been a favorite of mine for a while. I hope you update soon :)
katmama chapter 117 . 11/15/2013
I wondered what would happen between the boys and girls in the house. It's so funny that Sea has fallen deep into teen-age girlhood!
Awesomeness chapter 115 . 10/28/2013's the birth of a new Spot! When I finished reading this chapter, all I could think about was what would happen when Sam and Spot finally meet, and I can't wait for that day, or rather chapter, to come!
KoriLee123 chapter 115 . 10/28/2013
I just love it when Spot and Tiger are together! Her anger about Sam...I just really hope that he doesn't show up again, or that if he does it wouldn't be good for him. I can't wait for more! keep it up!(:
Awesomeness chapter 114 . 10/24/2013
Oh my god! I started crying when I started reading this chapter, and I'm serious, I really did! It was just so sad but good at the same time, it was gad! Get it? Sad and good put together. Anyways, please update soon!
XtremeAngell chapter 113 . 9/9/2013
Amazing story! You are doing great on explaining how they react to the real world.
I can't wait to see where they go from here! Please update frequently!
IhaveNoAmbition969 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
hey pretty good I liked it this will be a very good story, I hope you make many more chapters and never give up, also, check out my story "The last Paladin" if you ever get a chance, and if you do please review and tell me what you thought, and again, good story.
KoriLee123 chapter 110 . 8/1/2013
This is great! I cannot wait for the next chapter(:
Crepuscule1 chapter 109 . 7/28/2013
I love your story! It's mind blowing! Please update soon!
Breaking Sad chapter 12 . 11/26/2012
They. Are. Despicable. The scientists, I mean.
Really, if more people only read this. Life would change for the better. :D
Breaking Sad chapter 11 . 11/26/2012
If only she can find some means of escape from this cruel harsh life ...
Breaking Sad chapter 10 . 11/26/2012
I am totally in love with your writing style OMG :DD

Snakethorn ... at least there's someone who can give the Unknowns strength ...
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