Still loving your story!

Yea! I wonder what Jadan's ring had to do with Ceven. And now the wretched are involved. I can't wait to read more!

So glad you are back and can't wait for you to post again!

Oh my goodness! You cannot leave us hanging like this! So good!

Lol, I love the last line.

Oh boy!

Oh smokes! I remember the last time (previous version) and man do I like it better with this twist. Always that cliff hanger *sigh* but always interesting to read and find out what next. I feel this round has more depth to it so kudos to your growth person. :)

Yea, Barto, for being so intelligent, but now he has another problem to solve.

Oh poor Ceven. Can't imagine the agony of having no control over his body but still aware. :( things are picking up though so hey ho. :D

Can't wait to read more!

Too bad Vane is gone and can't take care of Roslynn.

Oh snap oh snap that treacherous outer beauty imbecile oh snap. D: it's always the idiots who somehow squirm their way in. Man I hope she isn't in there when they try to capture her there

Oh, man. Please post again soon! This is too good!

Wow. Thanks for the quick update. Great writing as always.

Your story was always interesting. I felt this round there was more of a storyline I can follow better. The latest chapter of the previous version were getting a bit jumbled and harder in a way to follow.

That Raith guy better make it out alive. xD I do like how Ceven seems more intune with his feelings this round and less of an a*hole who's not really open about his feelings.

Nice person nice.