|Reviews for Simple Complexity|
| Arastel chapter 4 . 7/17/2011
I like the basis of this story, the thing I'm having issues with the same I have with the Hopkins books. I don't like the poetry thing to tell a story. You've picked an idea that could have so much done with it, but within the lines of poetry, it falls flat.
Poetry is great, but when trying to tell a story with it you have to chose emotion or detail. That's just my opinion though, please don't take offense. Happy writing.