interesting

read at another time

You should totally keep writing and post the longer story! This was incredible!

I've re-read this a couple times and I love it every time. I love the writing style and the nameless characters. You should totally keep writing. Awesome!

I really like this story you shold continue to wright it. :)

I really like this story. I would love to see it developed further. Why did he have to leave for four months?. I'm sure there are going to be some females in his pack who are not happy with the rogue mating. What happened to the first mate? How old is he...and it goes on.
You have created a great start please continue defo want more.

this was good(:

I really loved it overall. Hope to read more from you.

wait, did she get raped or something?

As I said, still loving the tone of the story.

I wish that this had more chapters!

I actually really like this story, I like your imaginarium of werewolves specially (after countless stories where mates are decided by fate and are for life, yours is a welcome change).

Off to the next two chapters.

Love, love, love this story! add more chapters, post more stories, I Love your writing! :) ;) a few spelling mistakes here and there, but not serious ones.
I would love for this story to be longer, maybe be even more drawn out with the sex scenes, too.
think you did well with accomplishing a sense of urgency as well.
Can't wait for more stories ;)?

I really like this story. please make more like it ;) can't wait for more, and i thought the tone of the story was fine, no third person needed

I love the rogue female versus alpha male story lines. Always seems more exciting when the female character isn't always portrayed as helpless and weak. I liked your of use of description, especially at the start. Most people really do have perceived notion that werewolves are these majestic and beautiful creatures. Which they are but for people like myself who's deathly afraid of dogs, to see a wolf would be a terrifying nightmare. You're doing well so far and I'm liking the flow of the first chapter. It's a pity there's only 2 chapters so far :-( I don't often review stories, I tend to just lurk, read and move on but if I really like a story I'll leave a review just as an encouragement for the writer to keep going, can't wait to see how the story develops further :-)

I'll review the next chapter too after I've done.