Reviews for Murder On October 31st
BookcraZzaY chapter 16 . 6/3/2012

It's a powerful scene

I mean the end

I love that he has a dark mind to get her

And just the way you described this

It just gave me the chills

Love ittttttt
Eleantris chapter 16 . 4/5/2012
So glad to see an update for this again! :D This was great. :D

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LuckycoolHawk9 chapter 16 . 4/4/2012
Wow so dark! can't wait for more
Eleantris chapter 15 . 11/24/2011
And just when I think the plot can't thicken any further, it does! :D Great work.

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BookcraZzaY chapter 15 . 11/24/2011
Omg...everything's falling apart it's like of those sickness movies when everyone dies off and the government falls because of it. This is so much more than a murder story now

I love it!

I kept thinking of martial law when I was reading it and the tiamnamen massacre when reading it

It's defiantly a lifechanging chapter
Eleantris chapter 14 . 10/12/2011
Wow, fantastic couple of chapters! This idea of 'The System' is fascinating. I look forward to reading more!

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BookcraZzaY chapter 14 . 10/10/2011
It seems to me the system seems really corupt

It really really reminds me of something George Orwell would write

But I love it :)
BookcraZzaY chapter 13 . 10/10/2011
So we finally know who he is! Woahhhh
BookcraZzaY chapter 12 . 10/3/2011
I love it!

The end about the government watching you reminded me of big brother from the book 1984

But I'm not gonna plug I came to review even though fb is stupid and I didn't get a email bout this

But seruisly I love it

Franticly seatlrching through files on the killer And yeah you kind of made the police corrupt in this lolz

So my question does this mean it was the boyfriend? Such a greet mystery could be wrapping up so fast. I hope they don't do justice to the wrong person cuz it kinda hinted at that a little, Like the'd just grab a random person the street and blame them

Love ittttt
Eleantris chapter 12 . 10/3/2011
Wow, this is getting really, really interesting! You know I love it. :D

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AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I really like this, a story told through poetry, brilliant. I can't wait to read the next chapter! So that's where I'm going next!
BookcraZzaY chapter 11 . 9/24/2011
*in shock* chapter ever!
Eleantris chapter 11 . 9/24/2011
Wow, what was in the files? What is 'the system'. This is brilliant, I can't wait for more!

BookcraZzaY chapter 10 . 9/16/2011
Eleantris chapter 10 . 9/16/2011
I have a feeling something bad is going to happen to this wonderful detective... :P This was brilliant as always!

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