Reviews for Breaking Away
ThatLonelyOne chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Very triumphant and confident! I like it ) Rebellious, but it seems very much like you, not in a bad way though, it just seems like it was exactly what you were thinking at the time. A rant poem. Though, I must say, your rant poems have a lot of emotion and power in them if that makes any sense. Great job. )
mistywishes chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I agree with all the reviews this is so cool especially the -Let me repeat cannot- part, keep writing:)
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I love this! It's triumphant, optimistic, powerful, and yet spiteful, all at once, with a distinct feeling of you.
Revenge Is Bliss chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
It seems vengeance is compelling you to use those wings to fly away, to gain freedom.

This was good, well written and such, but I can't say I ENJOYED it... me and my father have always had problems, so I can relate. I hope you get out of that unsafe environment.
weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
the story of freedome of wrath and a first breath in to clean free air coulnt have said it better my self.