|Reviews for Rupture of Chance|
| Kat Pendragon chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
This was fantastic. I was cracking up at the beginning because Christopher reminded me of one of my best friends. I loved this. As a believer in fate, it made my day so much better. (It took me a little while to read because I was at work lol)
| anonymous at present S chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
1.I am sorry that this reveiw is anonymous :( But I can't get an account.. yet.
2. Wow. I love this story! D It's unique, the character's emotions are so real, great ideas are put into it, and the part about running to the car...stunning!
3. Improvements: ...*thinks hard*...uhh...try to make the character's personalities a bit clearer, if you get what I mean... :S
Rock. Hope you have time to write, 'cos you are giving this world and its people so much by doing so. )