|Reviews for Pretty|
| Lori Jane Summers chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
me being a pyromaniac and all i approve with the fire and stuff . lolz ummmmm so yeah
| NoLongeronFictionPressdotcom chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Very well written. I love this piece! I'll be keeping an eye on your work! :)
| just.a.breeze.in.eternity chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Holy crap. That was intense. Poor Isabelle, but at the same time... Oh my god. Isabelle.
| L.J Heywood chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Excellent story, Aeryn. So sad. I know how Isabelle feels; this was me at high school. I was never excepted. But hey, revenge is sweet. This was well written and emotive. I'm impressed. Hope to see more from you soon. Laura xx
| Firestorm Nauralagos chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Ooh, I like it! :)
| Rurrlock-God of Power chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Great story, very Carrie like, but with your own version of it. Good job!
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
A bit abrupt, but quite effective. Descrpitons are of course very good, and admittedly this does sound a bit like the book Carrie. But also distinct from it by the means used to achieve the climactic ending. Enough rambling, it was good. :)
| Rukia chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
That was a great story! I love the way that Isabelle gets back at Annessa. I can't see any faults in there!
| Revenge Is Bliss chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I noticed just a few minor mistakes.
[ripping the tiny tiara I had used to put my hair up out of my hair.]
Hair up out of my hair? I assume you meant face.
[Why couldn't I be pretty enough for them.]
Question mark, not a period. Everyone makes mistakes, though.
Other than those nearly unnoticable mistakes, this was very well written and the descriptions were amazing. The plot was good, although it is quite similar to "Carrie" by Stephen King. Ever seen it? Oh well, this was a great story anyways.
I feel great sympathy for Isabelle. Revenge is the best medicine, I suppose. (: