|Reviews for Shark's Tooth|
| Megan Ariano chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
the last bit was... ouch. heh. couldn't really say anything. i was hurt for her. :P
great start. continue please.
one thing though, 'He vowed as a pup that whenever he was old enough...'. i think it's supposed to be 'He vowed as a pup that once he's old enough...'. and i think it would be better if you separate this part and make it another sentence 'but he was plenty old enough now'
these are just my opinion, no big.
good luck with your writhing. :)