Reviews for The Adventures of Captain Pancake
KaiserSchwarz chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I... I can't believe how much this made me laugh. That was hilarious! xD Nice job on this chapter and I will definitely be interested in reading more.
SmilesesesXxXSickness chapter 36 . 12/29/2012
... I loved this book, and noooo! Cliffhanger! Do you have the second book?... -goes searching-
Jac the Demon Lord chapter 36 . 12/29/2012
-"Kody, do you think you'll be okay?" Jasper asked.

"Yeah, why?" Kody wondered.

"Because you're from a Winter Island. Doesn't the heat bother you?" Jasper asked.

"No, I'm fine," Kody said.

"That's strange because when I went to a Winter Island for the first time the cold was hard to bear," Jasper said.

"That's because you're a pussy," Nick said.-

I LOVE the dialog! It's sad that book 1 is over. I look forward to Book-BWA HAHAHA! She got back handed by a plank of wood! XD
melawe chapter 36 . 12/29/2012
Yeah maybe I might be there we have to see. Yes I'm proud you did it without my nagging lol
booklover1698 chapter 35 . 12/25/2012
PWETTY PWEASE! O.O I would love you until allll of eternity! :D . Update soon, awesome chapter!
Jac the Demon Lord chapter 35 . 12/22/2012
I hope Kyle makes a splashing return some day! XD He should join Pancake's crew!
melawe chapter 35 . 12/22/2012
well i liked the story there wasnt many spelling or gramatical issues and yes i knew who the turtle was! as for me driving you i might not be going next semester im most likely going to take time off from school and work full time so that i can rent an apartment to live in till james moves down here and also because i have a feeling that i would kill all the people in my class
Underak3r chapter 34 . 12/19/2012
Hmmmmm choices choices...is it natural not to have questions for figments of the imagination...anyways here goes. My first question goes to an often forgotten member of the crew, that gets more neglected by the audience then Jasper (sorry Jasper :P)

Scatman: How does it feel to be hugged so often by Pancake? (Weird question I know)
Also do you like Miki playing with you all the time or does it get annoying?
Miki: Where do you think your affixation on Princes first came about? After all you were raised by a single man.
Where did you find your giant hammer and learn to wield it?
Jasper: Ever think about dyeing your hair to stop at least one thing people can pick on you about?
How many recipes do you know and is your master a good cook? Cause if you came from her brain I
would imagine she would.
Ever had a firm relationship or will you have to always be saved by the twins from potentially hazardous partners...ohh wait this isn't a question after all you did end up in that crew which is probably more hazardous to your health.
Kody: Ever get tired of serving in the crew and actually leading the crew technically or do you only stay for
Pancake? That is my only question as its a tough one, Pancake is awesome...take your time.
Alex & Nick: Any new interesting moves in later books?
Which character in the crew would you most want to kill? Seems they are viable opponents.
Oh by the way, you would neither me cool or awesome without the other so appreciate it.
Pancake: How is Scatman since his emergency operation?
How good of a relationship do you have with your brother? Do you like him more then your parents?
Underak3r chapter 33 . 12/19/2012
LoL cock blocking duo... I wonder where that came from (hmmm one can wonder :P)

Love the chat with the crew, not everyday you get to hear the writer talking to him or herself as the case may be.

As for Jasper, I feel sorry for you bro but I don't think that will happen despite what we say...after all i doubt the other 5 characters will have many features we could possibly pick on about. Thanks Miki ;). Kody, you being a moron is fantastic, morons make interesting conversation topics. Twins...look forward to see what the master holds for you next. Pancake i am upset there was no part 2 but its hardly grounds to kill someone on.

As for you Pancakegirl, miss ya and look forward to more as always, hope to talk soon.
booklover1698 chapter 34 . 12/13/2012
Kody! ...Do you like...PANCAKE? O.O
Pancake...Do you take him to be you lawfully made crush? O.o
JASPER! You finally gave in to Tomato Head? GASPIES!
TWINS! Which one is which again?
Mikki! XD I want to SQUEEZE you to death! Figuratively! You're just so darn adorable!
Update soon! I can't wait for more!
Jac the Demon Lord chapter 34 . 12/11/2012
Kody was right to worry...very right.

To the Twins: You guys do know the reason Jasper's hair is red is because it's dyed from the blood of his enemies, right? You should really think twice before messing with him. XD

Jasper: Do you use any other kitchen utensils as weapons like...IDK, knives?!

Kody: How many people ask if you're Sasuke Uchia?

Pancake: How many times are you going to mug people for weapons...and by people, I sort of mean Jerry? Also, if you had a kid, would his name be French Toast? XD
Saria chapter 34 . 12/10/2012
My questions (locks up the boys in a room together)

Jasper, Nick, Alex, and Kody: what do you really think of Pancake-samma? And don't gimme some sort of sucky answer. YOU HAVE TO ANSWER TRUTHFULLY OR ELSE I'LL ... I'LL TELL THE AUTHOR TO DRESS YOU PEOPLE UP IN FRILLY GOWNS AND SING OPERA FOR MIKI! Oh, and did you know Pancake is engaged to this one rich ginger dude with freckles?

Pancake: Do you miss Brooke Charles? We all know you love him... And what do you think of your male crew members, Alex, Nick, Kody, and Jasper? Specific, please!

Pancake: What would you do if Bryce Everwater came back and asked you to marry him?

Miki: When are you going to back off of Pancake's men? You know that they don't like you... (Evil laugh) They love Pancake... Nobody else! Boo-hoo!

Brooke Charles: What do you think of Johnny Lynn's admirers? We all know you have incest thoughts about your little sister...
yukiteddy chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
amazing story :D
melawe chapter 34 . 12/9/2012
okay my questions (insert evil fangirl smirk) this one is for Kody. "so how do you REALLY feel about Pancake and dont give some shit answer about her being stupid and a loud mouth either."
this one is foe the twins "If pancake said that she loves you what would you do?"
now pancake "How do you feel about Kody and could you see yourself falling in love with him?"
booklover1698 chapter 33 . 11/4/2012
Hehe! Update soon! The last two chapters were great! I loved it! Poor Pancake, she's so insecure about her past...She should tell Kody first, since I deem them soulmate...HINT HINT...Update sooon! :D
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