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EmmyLee1 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I really liked this poem, it was kind of lyrical. I found that the words really conveyed the message simply and it still seemed as though they were hiding some deeper meaning just below the surface. Great work! :)
Fragile Things chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
this is a great piece. the rhyme worked in a rly great way and for me it had some lyrical attitude inside it so i heard it more as a song or rap while i was reading which is not something that happens often for me. really enjoyed it, i think itd be great performed live.
xMissNalax chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Love it, in an odd sense it applies to me.