omg i absolutely loved it, have you thought of perhaps writing a sequel? it would be amazing!

Awesome story! Love it!

SEQUEL? PLEASE?

I absolutely love this story. Please PLEASE tell me there is a sequel!

Okay so there are only two more chapters and I am literally BEGGING for her to either live happily ever after with Chance or for there to be a sequel.

I actually teared up. I don't do that, ever.

Dear lord.

Poor Chance but seriously the boy can be so stupid!

Oh dear. Here we go.

Finally they make love and he stops being an idiot.

My God...

Poor Chance. I am SOOOO HAPPY I found this story again after my computer died.

I loved this story :) I am looking forward to reading the sequel too, hopefully you will be able to start posting that soon!

I just wanted to touch on the subject of her tattoo process.

Most artists will apply a stincile before actually incking. It's like an outline they follow to make sure the art doesn't turn into crap while they're going at it. Also, she wouldn't be itching so soon after the process. Itching comes about a week later when everything starts to peal. Her hip would realistically be sore in that area for at least the next couple of days, then it would be tender.

My tattoo is on my ribs, and it's an entire word that's pretty large, but I belive the same healing process applies. Just a hint for you. Love your work ;)

This story is absolutely amazing. One I'm certainly going to have to read again. The plot was entertaining, the characters extremely likable, and it kept me on the edge of my seat. Also, I was pleasantly surprised by the ending. I hope there's more to come. :D