Reviews for I'm not even here
CoverGirlInLove chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Sad, really.

But I still liked it.
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
sesame.seed.bagels chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Wow! This is a great poem! Honestly, I don't read many poems that don't use proper grammar in their summaries (a tell-tale sign of an unworthy poem) but I am glad I picked today to be merciful. This is very, very good. You have said a lot in very little words, which should be the goal of any poet. It's a very conversational outburst, sounding very human, as the poem is saying. Bravo.