Reviews for Jenna
EmilySamara chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Very, very haunting. And what a perfect, bittersweet ending. The poor girls...EmilySamara
Commodore James Arkworthy chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I rather like the lack of interplay between the magician and the assistant. It makes them feel less like stable and tangible characters here, and more like ethereal things. Players on a stage. Shades of Robert Browning in the control of the dominant, powerful male figure with firm reins over the unnamed (and therefore expendable) assistant.

More importantly, Jenna is hawt lol n peacok fevvers iz sexay lololololol
Alice Sleeps chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I like this twist on the magician/assistant relationship. Some of the sentence transitions are a little awkward, but I can tell you know how to write and have a talent for it. I think I must go read some of your other work now :)