|Reviews for Child of mind|
| Nintendo Fan 101 chapter 5 . 12/22/2011
Are you trying to say that Evelance was never alive in the first place or was she alive at one time? Who's the girl on the bed? Please continue the story, because I really like it. But I'll be honest with you! There are some grammatical and spelling errors in this story and did you proofread it? Just offering helpful advice from one writer to another writer!
| Chatty Katty chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Love it! Update soon