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love the ending! great job!

Gosh. GREAT story. DEFINITELY one of my write well so keep writing. But, work on your grammar and spelling. I hope one day you'll come around reading these 134 chapters and correcting those mistakes. I feel great pleasure in telling you that these 134 chapters have felt worth my time and effort. I just wish you didnt call the second baby Rose. Why didnt you use one of those numerous names people as in your readers suggested to you?

Omg. Tina The Bitch is BACK!

If the surprise is Tina... grrrrrr

You seem to focus more pleasure on her instead of on him. Kinda lacking, no? I like whatever you are writing anyways.

I thought Tina was going to get Cleo if Alexander was nowhere to be found. Man, am I paranoid or what? I really HATE Tina. There is just NO denying. I was also sad that Alexander wanted a breather from Cleo. I hope they go on the break together.

I am ECSTATIC that they are getting married in Sweden! How is he affording all this? I'd like it if they just settle down there. Somehow, this reminds me of Tina. When is that bitch going to die?

I knew it! Those two bitches were up to something. Why cant florence just let go of tina? I was thinking of what florence said to alexander about cleo not telling him about how she brushed off tina's miscarriage. I have a feeling it will come back to bite cleo in her ass.

That was a good chapter. Really hating Florence with a vengence now. Have you ever thought of giving the translations to the words spoken in Swedish directly after spoken? You can do so by typing the translation in Italics. I think the translations being at the end of the chapter are kind of ineffective.

I cant seem to open those links :(

In some ways, I wasnt expecting this but I did know that something was going to happen and it did! She's pregnant right?

You do realise that you left their clothes all around the house right?

I was just thinking... how come Cleo doesn't have some kind of phobia considering what she has gone through?

Aww, it's actually over. It feels like so long ago, discovering this story and catching up and then waiting eagerly for each update. I don't even know what to say about how captivating this story is. A lot has happened... quite a lot... but you brought everything together quite neatly. I'm so glad they have a happy life ahead of them, bonded strongly together after everything they've been through. Good job on sticking with this and seeing it through to the end, and good luck with all your future works!