Reviews for Forever Lit
Blackfur chapter 7 . 7/19/2011
This is a cool story so far.
RedNoble chapter 7 . 7/18/2011
Why did you DO that?

you can;t just leave me hanging after such an amusing chapter! ;O

heh. okay so, really it was wonderful :D

I've decided that yes, galen is an alltime favorite character of mine.

so is flora.

and when their both together, it's just priceless.

well done! i cannot wait till you update again.

which you need to do twice as fast now that you snuck in a cliffhanger with ought warning. xD
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 6 . 7/17/2011
fairy vampire revial. I like
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 5 . 7/17/2011
what language are they speaking? Just wondering if you made it up or something...I like the names you picked for your characters!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
bravo!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
lots of action, that's good!
Ali chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Cool story...prety sure i'm goin to keep reading
RedNoble chapter 6 . 7/15/2011
God, that was hilarious.

i. love. galen.

siriously i couldnt help but snicker.

awesome chapter! i loved it :D
Tauria chapter 6 . 7/15/2011
Well . . . that was different . . . male vampires must get enjoyment from feeding tho . . . lolz :DD Anyway . . . can't wait for more! :DD
RedNoble chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
Damn that was intense at the end! for a second i thought she wasen't going to make it... or be ripped in half :P

i loved the inner ponderings and the words i couldn't understand because they were in a different language.

you did a wonderful job again -

update soon :DD (at your own pace of course)
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
You did a good job here! You got right into the mind of a five year old girl!
Tauria chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
I really liked this chapter . . . and I can't wait to find out what happened next! :DD Please update soon!
Annime chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
Annime: Ok, didnt do it this time! (BOOYYA!)

Chiro: Good

Annime: ANYWAY, great job!
Annime chapter 3 . 7/13/2011
Annime: DID I JUST DO IT AGAIN!

Chiro: Annime, calm down-

Annime: DON'T TELL ME TO CALM DOWN!

Chiro: -_-

Annime: Great job!
Annime chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
Annime: Did i just send a blank review?...

Chiro: ...?

Annime:...

Chiro:...

Annime:...

Chiro:...

Annime: ...ANYWAY! That was sad, but cute how she talk her baby talk!
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