Reviews for Forever Lit
Annime chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Annime: HEY, WAZ UP? Hey guess what...I FOUND YOU! Great story so far!

Chiro: -_- she went a lil crazy...

Annime: MUAHAHAHAHAHA!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
DOn't have time to read right now. From what I skimmed,this is really good.
RedNoble chapter 4 . 7/12/2011
Awesome start to the adventure. i LOVED it!

seriously.

especially the main character... and Flora -

Ahh~ i cant wait to read more! xD
Tauria chapter 4 . 7/12/2011
I like it! This was a really good chapter! :DD I can't wait for more! You are doing really good! :DD
RedNoble chapter 3 . 7/11/2011
Holy #%£ D;

Why cliff hanger?

The POV was well done, it had a lot of voice and her personality was clear.

Just some few minor more tiny mistakes. Nothing too bad.

Can't wait till you update again :)
Lunarious221 chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
I like the idea for your story, but in all honesty it reads as thgouh you wrote it in a hurry, just to be done with it. I feel as though you could do so much better with this story if you just slowed down and savored your words instead of rushing through them or forcfully yanking them out of your head and on to paper. Also you change your tone a lot which can be very confusing, but all in all it is a great idea and a decent start.

~Lexi E.
RedNoble chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I really liked this.

the mood was set well. the dialogue was very fitting.

strangely enough i was kept baffled by thinking of a boy in converse shoes at such an olden time to overpass the fact that the queen was probably planning something sinister.

either way this was amusing.
Tauria chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Ooh . . . creepy . . . I can't wait to read more . . .
Tauria chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
I really like your story, it is very good. This chapter made me wanna cry tho . . .
Tauria chapter 3 . 7/10/2011
Hm . . . this is really good. I really like it . . . I can't wait for more :DD
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