Reviews for This Time
chlodochar.wolf chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I cannot imagine how this song relates to flute music, haha. But I liked it.

Do you mean "Fall 'off' the edge of the earth" instead of 'of'? Perhaps you don't need to put down the chorus line by line every time it comes up? But no big deal. No other mistakes present, as far as I could tell.