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Having just read everything in a oner I feel like I have too much to say. I'm really hurting for Jonah. The band chewed him up and spat him out. You could argue that Jonah had lied to them, and he didn't ask for a chance to explain. But they didn't really offer him a chance either. They all blatantly knew what Orson was like. Damian was the worst. And when Hayden found out the truth, that Jonah had been trying to protect him, he didn't even apologise. Sophie sounds absolutely amazing. Yes, there's less chemistry, but after the way Hayden's treated him, I honestly think her kind of relaxed stability is what Jonah needs. I know that Jonah disagrees, and that now he's given her cause to give up on the relationship (if he doesn't end it first) and that he's going to forgive Hayden, and I'm so on board for reading whatever you want to have in the plot, but I honestly ache for Jonah who was trying for the first time to put other people first and was betrayed so badly.

Really enjoyed this hope we get a quick update!

Whhaaaaa! nooooo, i want moreee! :( Fuck Hayden, I dont want Jonah to get back with him...at least not straight away. The fucker didnt believe Jonah AND slept(/almost slept) with that other bigger fucker. Dgj,fgn,cfyi... Aha yeah. Love your story, can't wait for the next chapter :)

I'm really glad Jonah decided to move on from Hayden. He deserves so much better, and I would have had no respect for him if he had acted like a lovesick fool, pining for a man who has no self-respect.

I really look forward to the next chapter.

Just read your story. Very much enjoying it! I hope you get a chance to continue with this story!

Omg I'm so happy you're back! I had to read through the story again though so I remembered what happened. But I'm so happy and I can't wait for the next chapter!

is there any more

I hate Orson with a passion, I can't stop myself from growling in anger whenever I see his name on my screen. Lol. Oh, Hayden :( I hope that was a one-off with the drugs, I really don't want everything to just go downhill, and lose his kids :( Hayden needs to go talk to Damien, he can figure out the lies! God, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Omg seriously *on hands and knees begging* pleeeeaaasssseee tell me something bad happens to Orson reeeeeaaaaalllllyyyy soon. I can't stand that guy grrrr but otherwise great chapter : )

Omg please update soon I can't believe all this is happening grrrrr I'm sry but I hate Orson and Damien and hope something HORRIBLE happens to them VERY soon.

Ahhhhhhh my gawd! Soooooo happy you finally posted up! It was quite funny actually when I saw this in my email inbox, I opened it and I was reading the summary, and I was thinking, "Oh, my God, what is this? It sounds familiar... I'm sure I know..." and then the light bulb went off in my head, and I was like "YAAAAY! At laaaaaast!" Lol, anyway, so happy you updated, but so sad about the end of this chapter :( Oh, Jonah, he's caught up in a bit of bind! Hope it all gets figured out!

New chapter, yay! Gonna reread this from the beginning so I'm refreshed and ready for the next update :3

I like this story!

this is really intriguing. i am really curious as to what will happen now with everything going down. i like the characters too.