Reviews for The Elfin King
KatKatrina chapter 6 . 7/31/2011
i think your way of writing and citing the poem is unique and a really nice way to write this. your story could use a bit more detail, but overall, good job!
The Siege chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
OHH THIS STORY i remember...how creepy it was...hahaha remember when K and A read it during lunch? they were like "That was good, but kinda weird! :D" hahahaha love ya li'l bro 3333
Beast King chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
;.;...I'm just sitting here, numb and cold, and almost unable to even think clearly after this. Okay, maybe that's a little bit of an exageration, but honestly! As i said, I haven't read the poem, at least not until today, but I had hoped for some sort of happy ending! It was so creepy, but at the same time so fairy-tale like that I couldn't help but think it was going to get funny and goofy at the end. But I guess most fairy tales are actually creepy and sad. Great job on this story.
Beast King chapter 2 . 7/11/2011
You're right; this story is creepy. I like it though! It has a sort of surreal charm to it, I can't wait to see what happens next (has never read the poem).