Reviews for Girls Don't Make The First Move
SpiritHex3922 chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Pretty intense but I like it!
MidniteLayce chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Very intriguing. Throughout it, I was thinking that -she- was the human and he was the vamp and that this story would be about her new life as a creature of the night. But I was pleasantly surprised to read that she was the one with fangs. It made me want to re-read the chapter and see it from the true perpective this time.

Your writing style was pleasant, and I found myself enjoying taking a tour through Trini's mind. A lot of her fears and doubts are ones that not most characters in vampire novels ponder on, but they are ones I've always thought should be taken into consideration. It was interesting to see how she thought of spending eternity with James, and I really liked that last line- "This is forever, for better or for worse." I felt it really captured her perspective in that moment.

All in all, I'm pretty excited to keep reading this story. :) Please update at your earliest convinience!

~ MidniteLayce