|Reviews for Ninjutsu Samurai|
| Serene devil chapter 2 . 2/9/2012
AWWWWWWWWWw! This chapter is sooo sweet, and it kinda made me abit weepy, but what can i say, that's me.
| Dog Scepters chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
I know you said that you have problem with English, and while I understand the story so far, the format needs to be fixed. You have the paragraphs split but not the quotations.
Instead of making long author notes, you can explain the weapons concisely in brackets/parentheses.
To the story (Chapter 1): This reminds me of an old ninja cartoon like "Hattori-Kun", or the comical "Nintama Rantarou" where the ninja students split into different classes. Also, the setting, is it taking place in the past or present (either is possible)?
I don't get the name Violet Jay ("Murasaki Jei"?).
| Abby chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
SAD! TT I like it, but it's sooo sad! *Tissue tissue tissue* Third chapter, PLEASE?
| Abby chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Great story! The note at the end was very informative. Continue writing~!
| Kitsune chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Aw. Sorta sad, but also pretty cool. Ninjas are really awesome, and when there are shows about them it's also really cool! (hint) keep this going. Please...