Reviews for Temperamental
just ellie chapter 10 . 7/16/2011
I like your writing style, and I'm very interested in reading what happens romance-wise between Ben and Alissa. I also want to meet the friend. Keep writing! :)
Neuravinci chapter 9 . 7/16/2011
Please please post some more chapters soon!

-Neuravinci

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Neuravinci chapter 6 . 7/16/2011
Recycle souls-I am enjoying this story more and more!

-Neuravinci

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Neuravinci chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
That last line was so unexpected!

I love it!

-Neuravinci

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Neuravinci chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Creepy!...and exciting!

I love your stories!

-Neuravinci

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Ellyana Reddberry chapter 8 . 7/14/2011
i wonder who's that friend of Ben's is. is he also a demon?

thanks for the updates. we'll be anticipating the future ones!)

take care!
Ellyana Reddberry chapter 6 . 7/14/2011
hi! thanks for the update.)

so Ben and co. recycle souls...i wonder if they recycle souls as souls, too.

i'm really curious as to where this story will lead to. right now, it really seems unpredictable. but i like it! makes it more interesting! )

i remember in one of the previous chaps about Ben asking Allisa if she's ready to go. i wonder if that question has something to do with, perhaps, a plan to take her to the other Beginning to recycle her soul? hehe...

thanks for the update again! take care!
Ellyana Reddberry chapter 5 . 7/13/2011
wow. so far, it is honestly good. all the while i was reading it, i thought it was ben who was the ghost.

amazing plot and wonderful writing style. pls. keep this going )

thank you for sharing this!
The.Violent.Spazz chapter 5 . 7/13/2011
SHE'S A GHOST? Woah.
Julet chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
What could he be asking her? I really like the beginning of your story. I'm wondering why she is so alone all the time. Can she not leave the house or something? Her happiness is very child like. I wonder how old she is and he is.

Overall, keep up the hard work!
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