Reviews for The Cursed Crown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'll read the MAGIC MIRROR then.. :) *10 seconds of clicking next for 41 times later* KAY! finished :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is Frit doing with the traitor? Bad Fritz! Shoulda left her to the ravenous vine beast! That being said, love that Fritz and Niarosa are back together! just like the good ol' days. And now she can't be so mean to him cuz he's the only one who still thinks she's okay. Yay! Please add more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah Sir Hampley! Way to interveine! It was a very fitting way for Talon and Audrin to meet btw, love the fact that she just about kicked his ass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marcos you fool! Doesn't he remember the last quest? In which Audrin thoroughly out-knighted him? They're screwed without her! Anyway, this was an awesome chapter and i can't believe it took me this long to read it. Seriously awesome! |
![]() ![]() PUMPKIN SEEDS! hehehe. |
![]() ![]() Lol. It wasn't Burt's day. |
![]() ![]() YAY! Audrin's back, and so is Fritz! Loved the chapter. The whole training part was very funny. I'm a little worried for all the other characters if Audrin finds herself a real sword to practice with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thoroughly enjoyed this fun pleasant information dump of a chapter. It's good to get back to all the great characters, mostly Audrin and Fritz, the two greatest fantasy losers of all time! Please update speedily for I am impatient...Very very impatient. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, but one question, what did swift do wrong? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so good! I wasn't confused but I think I'll have to go read the magic mirror for a bit anyway. The bird really sold it for me. I loved the way it talks: like an eloquent Gurgi ... or perhaps that's just me. This reads more like a real novel than a lot of work on here - well done :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like what I've read so far, and I think I understand it, but I will read the first one. |
![]() ![]() FANGIRLSQUEAL-faint-...-gets up- I like a chapter that starts with Marcos, and some new guy who i imagine is almost, but not quite as attractive. Go new kind of attractive guy! And yes, I have other, less shallow things to say about your story, but it might have to wait until I see another chapter. Please write more in less than two months. k? |
![]() ![]() WHERE'S CHAPTER 2? Great start to this sequel, by the way. Audrin and Fier are coming back, right? I love their banter, so I hope they'll be in this story too. |