Reviews for Unknown Forces
Nikki Mondazze chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
This is definitely a great start to what could be a longer novel. I would be curious to know what becomes of the wolf in the body of Red Riding Hood. I would put this tale into a modern context, maybe a girl that friends call "red" because of her red hair...Idk. Try that for a spin and see where the story takes you. Will the wolf turn the girl into a murderer, a sly, stealthy cannibal? Will the girl change the wolf-will he find value in humans, possibly befriend her own friends? Will he eventually give up the hold he has on the girl so that her soul can reclaim her body...because it's the right thing to do? Anyhow, love it. Keep it up, firefox b.
Rakaziel chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Really cool twist on the story and well written. The style reminds me a bit at one story by Lovecraft but since it was a translation I can not exactly pinpoint if you captured his style or not. Anyway, it is well written.