Reviews for Perfect
999999999999999999999999999999 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
5 more lines, a little tweaking to make it all 10 sylabbles, and this could be a sonnet! No, but seriously, this is very well done. I can feel the emotion behind the words, the pain, and the longing are both readily apparent. The only item I could hazard to give to add to this piece would be the inclusion of classical structure, to make it more recognizable. Cheers, Riyin Nos Reche