Reviews for al yanna
trilby94 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Oh so striking! i think haiku is one of the most difficult forms of poetry and you did a wonderful job. I found myself reading it again and again and (as happens with good poetry) the words took that time to seep into my thoughts. Loved it!
valois chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
poems like this are exactly why i love haiku poetry. you paint such a strong yet fleeting picture in so few words, and the imagery is beautiful.
anachronistic chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
this is quite nice. wonderful imagery.
kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I liked this. I love haiku's because they really show off the writers ability to paint a picture with so few words. You did an excellent job. Great poem!