Reviews for The Prisoner's Tale
kaivi4eva chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
Awesome story
LonelyAngel22 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
This is cute. The only thing is you've set this in 1938 - the war didn't start until 1939.
General Frayia Toll chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
The first ending was better even though I didn't like it as much as the happy ending. It fit and was more realistic. It was beautifully constructed and written.
General Frayia Toll chapter 2 . 1/21/2012
I loved it! With all my heart. I never wanted it to end, but it was so short! My goodness, it was ah-mazing! Write another one like this one!
dncbrules chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
*cries*This is just... beautiful. Too bad it was short...
XxScriboHistoriaxX chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
Good story. The Alternate ending is sweet but the origonal is much more powerful.

Keep up the good work
HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 2 . 7/27/2011
Wow. That was umm... it was actually pretty good, there were times when I felt my heart ache for the girl. I think the scene in the tent and then before they part needs to be extended a bit, just because the emotion is there but the words aren't and it just makes it feel a bit empty. I have to admit the normal ending rings truer than the alternate ending, it's sad but it is fitting. There's not much else to say, beautifully written and congratulations.