Reviews for Hands Of A Monster
dulcee chapter 5 . 2/25
Video! Oh my.
Anyways, Lucas is cool, but he slightly scares me too- he's really intimidating and the way he acts is a bit... scary... idk, like... harsh?
Poor Colby - his petulance is quite adorable though. I cracked up at the "medical prescription" because yes, of course a dick in the ass will fix everything! :D
Anyways, I'll be waiting eagerly for an update- good luck!
writingright chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
Update? pwease? *puppy eyes*
DreamPrisoner chapter 5 . 7/1/2014
Please don't leave me like this! I love this story, and Lucas and Colby, there isn't a single thing about their characters I'd want any different. And I adore everything about this, if my eyes could sparkle they'd be like two headlights, that bright! And you're my favourite author on fiction press (and ) So, please, please, please continue this story or any of the others. Each one is just amazing and it's been so fun reading them all... Please! You're a genius.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/19/2014
I literally read this every so often because it's so good! As a rom-com, it's captivating in the right way & your leads into the upcoming chapters are really well done. About the characters, colby has an endearing character. He's made to be realistic in his desires and doubts. The way you describe his eyes convey a sense that they are a window to his soul and reflect his true feelings. Lucas is definitely that sexy, manly guy, and has that way of causing anticipatory intimidation. The way he basically seduced Colby in the bathroom was really hot, and I think you should exploit that chemistry in further chapters. Have colby pressured to give in to his hesitant desire with the finesse of Lucas' persuasion.
Side thought: I have a feeling that Ashton likes colby... Anyway, Please update soon!
Mandy S. Bryan chapter 5 . 1/28/2014
Poor colby. His friends are douches lol. Interesting story so far. Looking forward to next update.
KitsuneQueen chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
You ever gonna update? I love this story and was just wondering…
anonomousss chapter 5 . 11/11/2013
Loveeee this story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Hope you update soon!
Poppy Flower chapter 4 . 9/11/2013
I just need to tell you that I love this story so far and I hope you continue to update!
deanna chapter 5 . 8/16/2013
i wanna read moooooore! :'-(
deanna chapter 4 . 8/16/2013
woa nice stuff
deianna chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
hi there,
exciting story. problem is i can picture all the vomit (bweeee)
i really wonder, what's going on? hope colby gets out of this weird friendship, dislike domination without LOTS of affection... such a romantic, me!
i really like stories wherein the characters have real personalities, not just black n white...
ok i can't wait to read more... :-P
Wicked witch Ayumi chapter 5 . 8/16/2013
Woah, this story is so engaging and the characters seem very promising as well!
Are you going to continue this story? I hope you do because I'm looking forward to what's going to happen next! :)
Mcgde chapter 5 . 8/7/2013
Ahhhh updaaateee
semantics chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
5 chapters went by so quickly! Very cute, but I'm sensing there is more to the 3 musketeers' friendship ;) Looking forward to more updates.
vara silverwing chapter 5 . 6/11/2013
This is such an amazing story! Please please please update soon hun! I love all the characters, they're perfect, and its so believable! I wish you luck on writing more, and know I Love you too! *not in a too creepy Way haha* .3
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