I think I need a cold shower ! That was so fucking HOT ! 'nod, nod'
Such a great chapter ! I loved it ! :) me little pervert ! lol
And of course I want more. But also, I want poor Luke to find true love. With Colby would be really amazing.
Those two are so funny and cute.
Thank you for the fast update !

this is so good... wow. I love it so much. I really enjoyed the twist. I wonder if Lucas will confront Ashton and Tristen? he seems crazy enough. I was really laughing out loud and also the last chapter was so hot... perfection. I need more!

Yay, you continued this story! I read the last two chapters, and I definitely have a lot to say but watch this review be super short lol. Okay. So Lucas. I mean, he's honestly crazy, considering he stalked Colby and can't even tell him he was drugged without getting him drunk as a "test"? Like, I get it...but that's not what doctors do Lucas lol. He is actually pretty psycho, to a degree I don't think even he realizes. Is he supposed to be? I don't know. But I wouldn't call Luke a good guy by any means. Anyhow. This last chapter really tied in a few things, and the whole being drugged thing threw me for a loop. That is awful, and it kind of pisses me off when Lucas feels like Colby deserves to be miserable. Sorry bro, but you shouldn't have taken a drunk guy home in the first place, and now that you found out he was drugged into blacking out? Get over it. Haha. But it does make more sense. Colby was pretty pushy. Would I have done it? No. Especially with the whole virgin thing. But there is a progression of slow downward spiral that I can understand from psycho-Luke's POV. Dude. Just. Taking his virginity like that. Haha. God. But before I talk about the hotness, I have a couple technical things:

Water is like the opposite of lube. Getting your fingers up your ass when water is pouring over you is nigh-impossible, because it actually dries up your skin. So putting water inside would NOT be too cosy haha. Lucas would basically have to spread Colby's virgin asshole open and slowly scrape his finger inside, and it would be pretty difficult. Basically hole-loosening does not work with water. Try conditioner? It's awesome. Better than a lot of lube actually haha. IDK, maybe you have a magic ass that lets you use water for lube, but mostly that doesn't work. Thing two: The likeliness that Colby would be clean enough to take such a large cock is...so slim, even with the cleaning finger rubs, but whatever, that's part of the clean-ass yaoi fantasy lol. I have totally done the same thing. IRL if I were Lucas I would condom up. But Lucas is insane so whatever haha.

Moving on, this and the last chapter were really really hot. I wasn't really the biggest fan of the switch to Lucas, but it was really not a bad transition. And their interactions are so awesome, just the dialogue. Lovely. I like how angry Colby is, and I really want to shove him in with Nick and see what would happen. Haha. Chase-Colby-Nick threesome? Yes. Anyway, I love Colby a lot, but it was interesting to see him from Lucas's persective. And yes, it is so sexy, the way crazy Lucas is slowly working his way in. What a jerk, but still sexy. As for the flash-back chapter: whoa. Colby's reactions to everything had my heart pounding, like, where's mine? Excuse me? Haha. And Luke's strange clean-kink was interesting. The possessiveness was exciting, and the way Colby was just begging for it. Good lord god. Luke, you're an asshole, but in the dark corners of my heart I am right there with you.

After reading this I'm so sad Colby refused the crepe, even though that's one of my favorite scenes. Like-you asked for it! Specifically! It's not Colby's fault at all but I shed a single pretend year for Luke there. Damnit! Also I want that crepe so bad I am so hungry.

Okay. I love the story, and I'm glad you've continued. :)

Thank you so much for updating...I love this story...for some reason I really like Ashton..don't know why.

Jesus Lord.

Yesterday, I was like, "Time for FictionPress and any new updates." and I see updates from some stories I'm reading. And then I see "Calico Trayce", and Jesus Lord that's always a good thing.

I was so excited to see an update for this story.

Then! I fucking look at my battery percentage out of habit, and see a fucking 3%. Why, Lord? Why? Did I not swallow when you graced me with your holy seed?!

Yeah, by the time I wrote that small review, it was at 2%! So! I plugged with my friend's charger! And then I LEFT her house without my phone! The misfortune!

Anyway, awwww. The fact that this was so hot made Chapter Two more painful. (And yes, I reread Chapter Two.) Lucas fucking plummeted for this boy into the Pit of _. I can't find a word, and love sounds too shallow.

I laughed when Colby pulled out Lucas's dick and casually commented about it. Shit like that that makes stories gold.

I can't stop imagining what Lucas thought and felt the next morning when Colby cried out rape. Jesus, crushing at the very least.

I'm fucking pumped for the next chapter and maybe I'll even pump my hand for... stuff.

Handjobs for everyone!

Man. I like drugged colby. Is that bad? Haha.
Lucas is so cute. And slightly crazy. I love these chracters so much. So glad this is back! :D

OMG that was SO flippin hot... start to finish I LOVED IT

I read this yesterday while waiting for my car to get serviced then again at work. I probably looked like a crazy person pressing my legs together and fanning myself lol. But this really was that HOT! I kindof get why Luke was so crazy now, Colby was a completely different person that night. Still in hindsight since Colby was drugged, I think some apologies and forgiveness is in order. They both acted horribly to one another the morning after, Luke included. Anyway Im eagerly awaiting the next chapter I hope we get another steamy one soon!

Awesome chapter!
I loved it!

Haven't read. Battery low (2%). I wanna cry. Really wanna read this right now.

I legit was reading this during school when all the teacher was talking about was just the syllabus. I swear to you, my face was the equivalent of a fish outta water. I'm sure some sounds came outta my mouth as well... My God. That was toooooooooo hot

Update soon, I'll be refreshing ;)

Hum, so near the end I noticed you started changing between calling him Lucas and Luke arbitrarily. Even in two sentences right next to each other you went from Luke to Lucas. I'd have to read from the beginning again to see if that's happened before, but I feel like you should try to keep your character's names straight, ya know?

OMFG HAWT! Yeah, so I REALLY need these two to have a happy ending. I love the sappy side of Lucas *le sigh* And no, of course he didn't go to far!

that was perfect and way too hot haha! Lucas is in so deep i feel bad for him but colby is so lucky and he doesnt even know it. Glad we got this in Lucas pov and got to read what happened! Cant wait for the next chapter !

Love this story. Just read it all at once and I need more!