Reviews for Hands Of A Monster |
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![]() ![]() Loved it im soo glad your back to this story thay you sooo much. I love hearing lucas thought hope to see what happend that night this is gonna be a fun ride |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yesssssssss. Finally! I thought this would never come back. I'm so excited for this man. I loved lucas's point of view. BUT. I feel like you should totally do a brat/dom relationship with these two when this is all over. The characters are perfectly set up for it. I don't know if you write stuff like that but...i thought i'd throw it out there just in case because I love reading them. Thanks for updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I love it! ARGUHHHHH FINALLY! *calms down, breathes* Ahem, what I meant was... thank you for taking time from your busy life and updating this story, it was brilliant! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finish... the... story... O.O |
![]() ![]() Is this awesome piece of fic's abandoned? Nooo wayyyy I had so much fun reading this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww. I like this story so much it makes me so sad you haven't finished it. But what the fuck am I saying, I'm the biggest hypocrite ever-I suck at finishing shit. I have a sort of guilty pleasure for these kinds of stories, so I like it for that reason. But I also enjoyed the other characters-even his shitty friends. And the Brit dude! Lol he was so on point. During the second chapter though, Colby and Lucas's interaction was so great. I kept on laughing because Lucas was so chill and smug about everything. I'd be mad too if I were Colby. Like, who takes a person who just vomited home and then fucks them! What! Clearly this Lucas dude is one sexy creeper. ;) Did I ever mention that I love it when I find someone who can actually write? I was so pleasantly surprised by this. I am going to read more of your stuff soon. :) also following this shit anyway just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, of course I have to look at your stuff as well since you've reviewed me so much. ;) I really love this so far-Colby, I love, obviously. He's got that same kind of bitter mentality that Chase has, and I bet they'd have a good time over drinks just complaining about life haha. Colby's alcohol tolerance is, admittedly, adorable. And such a pushover! Poor thing. :( His friends suck ass. I also really enjoyed how well you mastered the misogynistic dude-bro bar talk, because that shit is ironically hard to pull off in a natural way. Super excited to see what goes down. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooo! Why? Why? Damn cliffhangers! I really wanted to see Tristan's reaction when he sees the video. ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 ) ( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was actually hot. Aw man, Colby! Things were just starting to get good. Scaredy cat! You know you liked it. ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 ) ( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Ashton was Colby's first kiss? Whoa! His friends can be total jerks and insensitive a holes sometimes. I don't blame him for acting like that with them. Hahaha! The ending was hilarious! Lucas is really too much. lol ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 ) ( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Lucas. Am I weird for that? I mean, he was actually pretty nice to Colby. Haha! Loved the ending. Gotta love Ashton's good sarcastic guess. ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 ) ( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Based on looks alone? I'd go for Tristan. I've always had a weakness for redheads. OMG! Hahahaha! Colby confused someone else for Ashton? ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 ) ( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhh. Dick up the ass. Good one. All I hope now is that Colby takes his prescription. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Video! Oh my. Anyways, Lucas is cool, but he slightly scares me too- he's really intimidating and the way he acts is a bit... scary... idk, like... harsh? Poor Colby - his petulance is quite adorable though. I cracked up at the "medical prescription" because yes, of course a dick in the ass will fix everything! :D Anyways, I'll be waiting eagerly for an update- good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? pwease? *puppy eyes* |